In the year of 1996 President Clinton said a few things that came out his mouth.He wanted us to wear uniforms like he has gone crazy! Education has nothing to with wearing regular clothes. But still we can wear outer clothes and still do good in school.We already have mean teachers, what else!
There should not be any school uniforms allowed I hate wearing the same color everyday! Plus who is going to fight over designer jackets? No one! Children deserve to wear regular clothes. It's bad enough that we have parents that tells us what to do! Like clean up! DO THIS DO THAT! Children should have equal rights too.
If the teachers could wear regular clothes then I'm going to start doing that! At least the teachers can wear same uniforms too! Because children these days cant do anything we cant vote whether we want this or don't!Instead we can just throw on some skinny jeans and some sneakers instead of ugly uniforms!
Uniforms suck and i really hope that one day people will notice that children don't need to wear ugly uniforms! I hope that every kid agrees with me! We cant even wear colorful sneakers We can wear regular clothes and express our selves and let everyone know who we are!
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Glasmill-
ReplyDeleteI like your essay, but you need to have evidence directly from the stories that supports your opinion. You feel very strongly about this topic, and your arguments would be much better if you had some facts to back them up.
Also, please try to avoid ending every sentence with an exclamation point when you are writing an essay, and make sure you capitalize "I."
Also, some of your essay is kind of hard to understand. Who is saying "DO THIS DO THAT"? What does that have to do with uniforms?
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